All Comments on 'The Boy from the Sea Ch. 03'

things just got very interesting! Well written, as always, and so sweet.

this, its so tender and sweet and i dont know what is going to happen and i like that about the tale, Cant wait for the next chapter.

This is getting even better I wish Adriel could explain his grief but the fun is in the reading onto the next chapter...

I was really getting into the story then they randomly have sex...it doesn't really make sense. Too hurried and not enough build up.