by Frank8787
This one is definitely meaner than previous entries, so it may be more polarizing. I do like the the dynamic of a smaller, less masculine gay guy domming a masculine straight guy though, which is why I brought the Tim character back. I have done thoughts on how the John character will react, but I’d love to hear feedback from readers on what they liked or didn’t like in this chapter. It could go in a lot of different directions.
Your story started out as a tale about a typical dom/sub relationship where Scott somewhat respected John’s boundaries. But now, it seems like John is being trained for prostitution which is not cool. Especially since Scott let Tim degrade John the way he did. A true dom would never do that. I hope subsequent chapters go back to the exploration side and away from the creepy territory the story seems to be heading towards.
Well, it’s a fantasy and doesn’t necessarily have to to exist within the parameters of a normal and completely healthy dom/sub relationship. I intended for John to end up serving multiple men, each with differing styles, but ppl don’t seem to like the direction, so more than likely this will be the last chapter.
I love this series and only hope it gets more humiliating for John, maybe even with some blackmail from Ray or embarrassed exposure to.someome he knows.
I hate this character -at dinner and worse now. Therefore I hated this chapter. There is no way he would just demand a weekly blowjob and get away with it. Please have John draw a line at Tim, or leave Scott and everything here behind. Drop the Tim character please!
Scott is not John's boyfriend. He uses this hot young straight guy. He took his anal virginity for nothing and he fucked this hottie whenever he wanted. After he was done with this hottie then he would share him with his old guys friends. John loved sex then he became stupid.