All Comments on 'The Boyfriend Pt. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I've read all of this start to finish since discovering your stories, and I never read long series on Lit. This is great stuff. I can't wait for Liam to get fully immersed in the pure awesomeness of the whole set of anal experiences, from enemas to showerhoses, the confidence of letting yourself really go when you know you are totally clean... Fingering toys stretching fisting pegging and please let him experience another guy 😘

Hardrider56Hardrider569 months ago

I am interestec in what the story is on Blake's Dad. Almost sounds like he took the fall for something Blake's mom did and Blake is tore up tbat she could have pointed out thevtruth but didn't. Keep it all going please.

taylorstormstaylorstorms9 months agoAuthor

@Anon, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

@Hardrider, we'll get there, don't worry! <3

TotosRevengeTotosRevenge4 months ago

It looks like I need to read two full series to be on course with this. Going to quit instead. Couple critiques ... your chapters are way too short. And, each series needs an intro telling the back story. Thirteen chapters in to a story should yield more than confusion. You truly have potential but you need to learn how to structure your stories. Cheers and good luck.

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The next chapters of "The Camgirl" are up on the Patreon page. You can get early access to the most recent chapters on the $5 tier, and there are two more tiers now, each with stories about characters that appear in "The Camgirl". I try to achieve a blend of smutty and wholes...

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