by taylorstorms
In reading over 3k stories on here I have never given a 1 star rating. The only reason is that over 50 chapters of masturbation and fantasy stuff is a little too much. The story has moved away from what it was and I am about to stop reading it and that is a shame because this was a good story to start.
@diablo I'm sorry it's not for you anymore. Is there anything you think I could merge or cut to make things flow together better on revision?
This is exactly the kind of stuff I love from your writing. No need to apologize. :-)