by RobinLane
Really enjoying the story - very well written - looking forward very much to the next chapter
I am really enjoying this novel, sort of being there with robert and terry, so romantic and cant wait for the next installments and has the makings of a great movie, already fantasizing who will portray who... congratulations
Sorry, but can't think of a thing to help you improve. It's very good. When will the movie be out?
Improve the use of correct words, check the spelling and punctuation. Then you should always get 5's.
Excellent writing, bears a sort of resemblance to Sir Dudley Pope's work.