All Comments on 'The Boys in Blue Ch. 13'

This made me so emotional I could almost imagine standing there watching it all play out. Fantastic piece of writing look forward to a few more chapters but PLEASE don't let anything happen to the guys let them all come back safely.

Who penned, "Someone to Watch Over Me." Just to clarify, don'cha know.

Is there a reward for biggest missed opportunity in a story line? After chapter 6 it becomes one big cheating fuck fest. Amazing that you are also the author of Tides Of War, with almost no sex, and continuous appeals to virtue, honor, fidelity, and heroism. That is talented writing of meaningful literature. This series has dissolved into a collection of repetitive stroke stories for the full time whackers. Glad you cleaned up you act with Tides.