All Comments on 'The Bra Salesman Ch. 03'

So hot!Please let there be another part to this incredibly well writen story!And then another!And another... :)

Just saying, so many places to take this.

just loved it! Plz continue can't wait for part 4. Post the next chapter ASAP plz...

superb! Fully erotic! When r u posting chap 4?

Can't wait to see what happens when this blows up in his face, lol

Thanks for the comments and praise. I should have another installment sometime around the holidays.

Sorry. Couldn't get the copy and paste thing to work. Even though I copied and pasted it exactly. Damn.

But it's Tom Waits' "Heartattack and Vine."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&feature=endscreen&v=FfXSef8FOAg

OK I THINK I GOT THE RIGHT LINK--ABOVE

THIS IS HOT

HOT HOT HOT

you have to wait in line--

what you say you meet me down at Heartattack and Vine..." Tom Waits

MUSIC FOR YOUR SWEET GIRL/WOMAN TO MASTERBATE TO--

so she's all nice and wet and warm for you

(and imagining you're Tom Waits)

and I'm a writer--but

NOTHING ON EARTH COMPARES TO THE SEDUCTIVENESS OF TOM WAITS' MUSIC IN "JERSEY GIRL" AND "HEARTBREAK AND VINE." NOTHING. ON EARTH.

(Except some of my poetry.)

"do another line" or screw another time? (Thank god a'm a poet--honestly--the pleasures are endless)

(don't know about it? RESEARCH: MUSIC)

NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Virgins--

" ... you can see a million of them down at Heartattack and Vine." (Tom Waits "Heartattack And Vine"

Thank god. I don't wanna be alone. Or a virgin.

(and ah aint)

(but i did have trouble getting pregnant--and needed a doctor's help--just saying--)

What a line! This bra salesman has the biggest line of BS I've ever heard. As long as she's happy with the results, he should keep pounding her.

Great story.

Should have fucked that babe in the ass.

At the end, maybe you could have some kind of twist like she knew the entire time he was bullshitting and was just horny or something? Idk, it'd fit pretty well into the whole satirical part.

These stories are so great. Please don't ever stop writing them. So funny, so hot.

Awesome good.