All Comments on 'The Brass Statuettes Ch. 17'

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PEATBOGPEATBOGabout 16 years ago
I like how this is going!!!

A little too short but enjoyable! Alvin and Crossman have confirmed my low opinion of them and Jim Sweeney has risen somewhat in my opinion. With Sweeney's help Frank is on the way to finding the identity of the "inside trader" who has to have been somebody at the secret meeting. My bet is on Lambert but Crossman can not be ruled out IMHO. The interlude with Gloria and Brenda was a necessary distraction since we are, after all, at LITEROTICA! More please. Pete.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Hateful characters

seem to be present in an abundance!

For me Gloria and Alvin should catch some crabs

or something along that line. Gloria should

have seen that she was being set up and taken

a protective line.

Oh well, at least Frank and Trudy still have not

done anything stupid....... I can't understand Detlef

telling Sweeney that yes he had to go down to but it does

look like the manipulator is not Sweeney, Alvin, Detlef, Aaron,Jason or Frank which bothers me because the others are almost always off-stage and does not seem fair to give them a major role.

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