All Comments on 'The Breaking of Hypergirl'

well written hope more is on the way

very good. Yeah, well written.

This was a great read. You should write more chapters of this.

Can't wait for the sequels.

okay this was absoulutley awesone post more chapters

I love this and im super.glad you.wrote. it!

enjoyed but think hypergirl needs to break free

Great work for a first story! You obviously have experience. Please give us more stories!

A wonderful story! I definitely was squirming in my seat the entire ride.

i'm sure future chapters will be excellent as well!

Part 2 would be great

liked to have seen her become a raging nymphomaniac in the end, perhaps succumbing to her tormentor's constant commands but I liked the story as a whole.

Too much capitalization.