All Comments on 'The Bred Ones Ch.03'

Well, that didn't disappoint AT ALL! Another steamy and provoking chapter! 5* from me! I am in love with the budding D/s relationship Maddy and Alex have going, I loved all the hints/leanings toward BDSM and the "yes sir" moments, and I am super curious about what exactly this council's nefarious purpose is! Everything was perfect, and this story is building so well! I can't get enough of our two protagonists here, and I know I'll be re-reading this chapter. I look forward to the next one! Keep 'em coming!!!

All The Best!

The balance between madonna and whore is so perfect. Even at only two pages, it seems like a lot happens and the sex scenes are hot hot hot. Please keep it going. Don't drop the series on us!

I am truly enjoying the scenario that they are placed in, a non consensual consent environment...That's Hot! What I cant stop thinking about, is the type environment they will be released back into. Will it be their same world, or a new alternate society...alien from what they are use to, yet in some ways familiar (much like an animal reserve). Anywho.... this has been a very good read. Thank you for sharing such a fabulous story. Kisses

Alex and Maddy have definite chemistry. Now I'm horny...and it's all your fault.

Just a word to the wise. ;)

Right

I have been checking back here to see if you've written part 4 yet! Please don't leave us all hanging! I want to know what happens! :)

It is an intriguing set-up and very well written so far. I like that they are off balance in the same situation, and I like the way they are interacting with each other (aside from the smoking hot sex!). The way they are bonding to cope with what is happening is very realistic (and ironic since that seems to be what their captors are trying to force them to do). It is good that despite being forced to give into their captors' wishes, both Alex and Madeleine are doing so in a way that makes them seem smart, not dumb and spineless.

It does seem a little unfair that poor Madeleine seems to be getting the brunt of the invasive punishments - brain eating chemicals no less. I wouldn't like to see her become some sort of degraded whipping girl, or brainless doll. But so far, this is a very well written written story, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Also, without wishing to sound picky, the other comment is right, the Navy has no rank of Major, Alex would be a Lieutenant commander.

absolutely love it! It's so hot and the sex is amazing. Please continue this series.!

Please come back and write more for the series

So, for those of you who were bemoaning that AA needed to be finished, I think it is done. The Queen just needs to start the sequal.

This story is spectacular too. And I am glad that others mentioned that there is no rank of Major in either the Navy or the Coast Guard. But yes his Air Force General father would have been been only begrudgingly happy that his son had probably gone to Annapolis (the Naval Academy) and not the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs

Please continue this! Please, I beg you!

This is the first time I've liked a story on Literotica enough to post a comment. I love these characters, the chemistry between them, and the intrigue of the plot! Please write more!

Please don't leave us with this dead end, more more more!

What happens to them? What else do the captors torture them with? Do they escape? I need more!

I love it, please finish it

Will we be seeing any more of your work on Literotica, or are you off on another site? Have read two of your stories, and neither is finished, just saying...

What happens next?

OMG, DON'T STOP THIS STORY NOW!! THERE IS A SWEETNESS ABOUT THIS COUPLE THAT TOUCHES MY HEART...... MORE PLEASE.. THANK YOU.