All Comments on 'The Breeder Pt. 02'

Not sure where your story line is cuming from. Seems so realistic.

Please continue and thanks for writing.

Loving your stories. Anticipating what will happen next. Next please!

I hope Melanie has litter after litter and continues to get her cunt stretched wider. Excellent writing, please continue

While I enjoy the overall premise, I think the Beta is a bit of an ass and showed no care or consideration for Melanie. If this is all about breeding, then I would hope his swimmers were duds because he's not exhibited any great "Daddy" skills as far as I've seen. The Alpha at least has shown a modicum of concern but once again just leaves after making his deposit. I think both these intense scenes deserved a little After Care. I'm not talking about declarations of love or moving her into his his house but some cuddle time, a snack and something to drink has certainty been earned.