All Comments on 'The Breeder'

Well done.

An original idea for a change, and well-written.

This was great. Original, sexy, very hot, and even a slight romantic twist. Please continue. Can't wait to see how the story progresses...

It had heat and romance. A very nice combination.

I really liked this story but it is unheard of to have anybody that fat in one of those communities, everyone works too hard men and women with healthy diets. I hope you write more like this

Very good and detailed.

I loved it. Is there a part 2? I hope so as it was HOT.