All Comments on 'The Brother's Wife Ch. 02'

Great short read, to the point and racy sensual flavors

Good work. Just a small criticism, you should be more consistent with your characters. You call the brother Thomas in 1 and then Ian in 2.

Apparently the brother is going through a bit of an identity crisis. He’ll stay Ian from now on, unless he changes his name to Isabella or something

Tomas is at the Pub, Ian has the much larger farm, and Sean plows the fields.