All Comments on 'The Brother's Wife Ch. 03'

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IrfonIrfonover 11 years ago
Gentle and beautiful...

...but a sad story - well written.

Thanks for this story - any more ?

IrfonIrfonover 11 years ago

...but a sad story - well written.

Thanks for this story - any more ?

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
please keep your promise

where is the rest of the story? how is it they are still on the land if Tomas/Ian owns it and has so much debt? When is the child due?

you said:

"Backstory"

"Wait for it. I take my time writing in the nuances of my characters and what brought them into their current situations. She wasn't always a farmer's wife, it wasn't always just 5 acres."

and?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. The writer really set the mood and the stage beautifully. Probably a forlorn hope but would love to see this finished.

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