All Comments on 'The Brush Tiger of Derven Ch. 21-23'

She is very poor as a huntress if she can get caught that easy by Irron, how she ever was able to slaughter the brush tigers is beyond me.

She is not even honest towards her friends, keeps a lot of secrets and is not a convincing character in this rather thin story line, sorry.

Outstanding as usual Dusk:) I love how brave Mora was letting the Sun grab her, knowing the Prince was secretly watching, cleverly allowing his true nature and the truth of his actions come to light. The Tiger knowing he carries the wooden knife, and her skill at hitting his shoulder. She is smart enough, and emotionally disciplined to keep her feelings hidden until the whole truth is revealed. Deftly written as usual:) Thank you for writing for us:)

E.

I was remiss in not adding that at least now, we know for whom the vampire and post apocalyptic stories are written 😉

jerin51, Your words imply that your an accomplished writer, yet you have no stories posted. You attempt to gain recognition, by belittling others. Your attempt to appear intelligent failed, your nothing.

AfterDusk, thank you

C

Why would Rick put the collar on her again?