All Comments on 'The Building Bombshell Pt. 01'

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chytown over 4 years ago

Please get an EDITOR!!!! Or at least proof read your story before you submit it. Thanks for the read.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

nice try

keep it up, where is 2nd part

HornyHermit over 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks

Thank you for the feedback. Will keep it in mind. The second part will be out soon.

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