by Theninjagamer308
I hope this is part 1 of many. Good start now build the sexy situations, Go wild in their bodies!
I am not sure there's been such a preponderance of these type stories lately!
I can't even begin to say how bad this was....but geez, at least put it in the right category (Sci-fi and Fantasy) so those of us really looking for Mature wont waste our time.
In this case it would be a crime NOT to.
Easy to believe someone could write this, but i am surprised that it was published.
And yes the writer could easily improve. Surprising if he didnt improve actually.
Hope so.