All Comments on 'The Bully's Revenge'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
W T F was that ?

Terrible

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good start

I hope this is part 1 of many. Good start now build the sexy situations, Go wild in their bodies!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Why are there so many these stories???

I am not sure there's been such a preponderance of these type stories lately!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow, this was bad.....

I can't even begin to say how bad this was....but geez, at least put it in the right category (Sci-fi and Fantasy) so those of us really looking for Mature wont waste our time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Usually i don't jump onto the guy being condemned.

In this case it would be a crime NOT to.

Easy to believe someone could write this, but i am surprised that it was published.

And yes the writer could easily improve. Surprising if he didnt improve actually.

Hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Next chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mmm

Continue please

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