All Comments on 'The Bureau of Pleasure Control'

Great story, and a fascinating concept, loved it.

Hope you will provide more history of how this “new world” got started.

I like the premise of the story. I'm hoping you continue this thread. I assume most girls are doing a lot of cock sucking and anal given the situation, Evan as that leaves most of them high and dry. Would love to see how that impacts their scores and learn more about the world you've made here.

Can't wait to read more! Please continue!

This is great - teasing, sexy, hot. I'd love to read more - how their relationship develops as the experimental drug test continues, how Kristen copes with the punishment stimulation.

More, you're on to something special.

I love the dynamics between Kristen & Deacon. You write the relationship between these two characters really well.

very interesting story I like the different take on chastity in this story.

Well written. Original. I do think the girl would have been crying after her paddling, and perhaps needed a little time.

An interesting beginning to a unique dystopia. I'm enjoying it so far. I see there are multiple chapters, and I'm only on #2! I'm looking forward to continuing!

Terrible

Hate it

Nice