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bigguy323about 13 years agoNice little story. Her going with him in his car was a dead giveaway. No woman in her right mind would leave with a total stranger in his car.
I know there are some sluts who do this but they are crazy in today's world.
Anonymousabout 13 years agomildly predictable but very well written.
Gave it a 5, despite lack of anal action. (Can't have everything.)
Thank you!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWell it's fiction
and good erotica. Give this young new writer a break.she just might end up writing porn like Ann Rice. I give her a 5 for encouragement.
Anonymousabout 13 years agothis is a surprise
How it worked for both and a novelty for thrills to us.
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