The Bus Boy Ch. 01

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mellors14
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But just as she was beginning to enjoy the feeling, her pussy exploded in climax again. No build up. One moment she was thinking this felt good. The next she was gasping for air as lightning bolts of pleasure shot through her body. She couldn't cry out. She couldn't move. She could barely breath.

Ted was amazed at the sudden change in Lynn. One moment, she had just relaxed and his prick was starting to glide easily into her. The next she was going crazy, writhing on the crate, bucking her hips, trying to get away from the fleshy pole that had gone in a second from intimidating her to driving her out of her mind. The sight made his balls start to throb and his cock harden as he approached his second climax of the night. Her cunt tightened down on him, squeezing him hard. At the same time, it was getting slicker and deeper, pulling him into her cunt, lining his head up with her cervix, trying to draw the cum out of him and into her womb. He tightened his grip on her luscious ass, trying to hold her on him while he deepened his thrusts, driving his fat length into her.

Lynn was only dimly aware of him. Her body was entirely wrapped up in her orgasm. She finally managed to gasp for air and make a meek cry of pleasure. She was barely aware of Ted gripping her hips harder and deepening his strokes other than that it made her cum even harder.

Ted was holding his breath, trying to hold back his climax. He wanted to enjoy his first time with a woman, draw it out. But it was too much to ask. The sight and sensation of Lynn cumming all over his cock forced his body to thrust harder and faster into the pretty girl.

"I think ... I'm going to cum again," he gasped.

"Cum inside me," she gasped. "I'm safe."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes! Fill me up, you stud!"

His balls emptied and his shaft swelled as his orgasm began. He thrust deep into Lynn and then just held himself there while his cum traveled down his urethra. His whole body jerked as it came frothing out, filling Lynn's tight pussy, sending streams deep into her womb. He almost fainted from the pleasure. Cumming inside a woman was even better than he'd imagined it could be.

His orgasm sent Lynn back into the stratosphere. It felt like he was pumping even more cum into her pussy than he'd pumped into her mouth. It spurted out around his spasming cock, running down her thighs. She managed to gasp out, "I can feel you cum. Oh God, it's making me cum so hard," before she was overwhelmed again.

They held their position for several minutes, not moving. Lynn's body gradually calmed, her orgasmic waves settling into little aftershocks before finally abating. Ted enjoyed every moment -- from the feel of Lynn's stretched cunt still spasming around him to the sound of his cum leaking out of her pussy and falling in large wet drops on the floor.

It was Lynn who broke the silence. "Wow."

"You're telling me."

"That was . . . incredible. I don't think I'll be able to cum again for a month."

Ted pulled his soft prick out of her battered pussy. It was followed by a stream of their combined fluids. Lynn felt suddenly empty without him in there, then felt her vagina relax to its normal size. She sat up, went light headed and went back down again. Ted gently picked her up and pulled her into his arms for another deep kiss. The supererotic feel of Ted's lips and tongue on hers, his soft meaty prick rubbing against her mons and his load leaking down her thighs made Lynn moan again.

"I'm glad my first time was with you," said Ted, when they broke.

Lynn blushed. "If that was your first time . . . I don't think I could take another one."

Ted replied, "That was mostly you. I just stood there."

Lynn kissed him again. She reached down and patted his cock.

"What do you say we finish up here and go back to my place?" she asked.

Ted nodded. Lynn grinned back at him and turned to gather up her clothes. With another little smile and a blown kiss, she hurried off into the bathroom. Ted's eyes locked on her as her ass made figure 8's all the way there.

This might be a good summer after all.

To be continued ...

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A great scene with an excellent build-up

This was an excellent piece. The build to the eventual seduction was, for me, characterised by the lack of the usual expectation that the guy would take control. A very egalitarian view of how it should go. Thanks, a great read.

mellors14mellors14over 5 years agoAuthor
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Good catch on the name. Resubmitted with correction. As for who Mark is ... that's a long series that will drop in a few months time.

mitchawamitchawaover 5 years ago
Autonomy

Your sex scene was one of the best I've read. It was long, detailed, physical, and emotional. You have the talent to be a "great" writer of erotica. Yes, there are some grammatical and spelling problems, but those can be corrected (try using grammarly or some other editing program). The major problem for me was your incredible ignorance of female autonomy. Look it up on Google or where ever. The part that struck me as the most glaring was when his balls hit her clit while he was encased in her, impossible! Again look it up. These kinds of mistakes can be easily corrected with a little research. Keep writing you have the talent and the ability to make sex read realistically rather than clinically.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
good start

Okay, noticed a few others who enjoyed the story with a "but". I'm one too, but my issue is "three inches wide"? I've had a couple of ladies toot my whistle, but I don't know of any who would open that wide. 8.9 inches long is one thing, but twice as wide as a golf ball? C'mon man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Who is Mark?

"She wrapped her hand around it -- her fingers not touching and Mark shuddered from head to toe."

Some of the dialog is terrible. The guy doesn't know he's endowed nor his way around women, but he knows he shouldn't be ejaculating in her? Non sequitur.

Minus a Star for "to be continued." that's a loser's conclusion. "Thi might be a good summer" was an appropriate conclusion.

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