All Comments on 'The Business Trip'

"I'll even say that, at times, I'd been attracted to girls and had let my mind drift there sexually when I masturbated." No, that doesn't automatically mean you're a lesbian. But it does mean you're at least bisexual.

I really enjoyed the story, and the writing was excellent. However, too many 'while this' and 'while that's', sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph. Toward the end, I found this very distracting, as the narrative seemed to loose its flow and rhythm. As I said, though, great story and a real turn on to read.

Looking forward to more chapters. Especially the husband's story about his hearing about the experiences.

can you use pantyhose or stockings next time?

Loved the steady build-up and tease. Very erotic. The way you described the occasional awkwardness in their body positions during sex was very refreshing and added a strong sense of believability to the story. Nice work.

I Loved Every "Kiss & Lick"

A Very Satisfying Tub Soaker Story

After looking through 8 pages of "New" Literotica stories and repeatedly hitting the back arrow in disgust after reading less than one page of numerous incredibly poorly written "Honors" stories that are actually no more than tales of beastiality not so cleverly disguised as BDSM/non-consent/werewolf/alien breeding/non-human stories; I come across this little two-page jewel about two human beings actually having consensual sex. How incredibly original and unique! A story that is coherent, realistic, erotic and (Gasp!) entirely within the realm of possibility, told in about the time it would take two people to have sex. Let's hope this is the beginning of a trend on Literotica in which plausible, intelligent writing about human sexuality can begin to replace the silliness that passes for erotica these days.

continue the story

just finished your story and loved it. I hope you continue with you story about the other two days of your trip.

Your story is well presented. But you promised more and it has been a month since you gave us your first installment. Kari and Alison really do need to share more of their "Business Trip" with the Literotica readers.

So Please, Chapter 2 should be coming soon. Is it not?

There is another story in the works. Should be another two weeks or so.

One of the hotter stories I've read. Ready to get off with the timing of both of you getting off in your story.

The second memory has been submitted. It's called Viva Las Vegas and should be up in a few days. Thanks for all of the encouragement!

Your story is so well written. I could feel the passion of those two women and there curious adventure! Thank you for sharing!