All Comments on 'The Busty Trophy Bride Ch. 01: The Training'

WOW! is all I can say...please continue this, it's really HOT!

You are off to a good start. One of the things that bothered me was that the trophy wife, doesnt seem to say much and rarely responds at all. Ive done what he did to her to women RL and the experience is always a lot of fun for both... but I have yet to see a woman who wouldnt talk about it, much less moan, groan, sigh and cry a little but... or a lot because of the loss of control over how her body was feeling. The fact that your trophy wife doesnt react/respond much... really makes it hard to suspend our disbelief in the story. One thing I love about doing this to a woman is the fact that she can not stop herself from moaning and grunting (making huge efforts to not let on how wet and needy she is ). Also... adjusting the toys to random sequences of a variaty of intensity... is far more effective. Because her body can get use to it otherwise. When it cant grow accustomed to its stimulation... she cant help but stay aroused unabated.

Thanks so much Master_Doctor. I'll try and revise cause she could easily have a lot to say about it all. Trying to resist but still complying with his commands. Good ideas. Thanks.

Hope he breeds her like a good wife

Really great first chapter! I would love to see him persuade her to remove or stop taking her birth control next ;D

I am so ready for the next part of the story!

Keep it coming

I love the story. I love the internal struggle she has between her mind and our body and the confusion.

The crude expressions detract from the story - but a really good idea. Wish it wasn't so wordy but that seems to be a trademark of his stories - still enjoyable read.