All Comments on 'The Buttercup Spell'

The idea behind the story was brilliant, but the pace that the story progressed wasn't, there could've been a lot better buildup, 4stars.

I really liked this story. I wasn't expecting the sucker punch at the end and it made the story even better. Keep up the good work.

The story is great but a slower build with Ben fighting internally during school, the anticipation of dinner, TV and then going to "bed" to take another step forward would have been better. Keep writing, I look forward to future stories from you.

A lovely story, well done.

Congratulations you wrote such a wonderful story for your first. You can only get better.

Look forward to reading your future works

Scores 5/5

This was a really great first story with a sweet ending. Great work!

Cute! There were some inconsistency on when and when not to use the codewords, but since it was all BS I guess it doesn't matter. 5*

Great first story, interesting premise, sympathetic characters. Please keep writing!