All Comments on 'The Butterfly - A Transformation'

by ElectricEgo

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MrWilburMrWilburover 2 years ago

Thank you for writing.

CarnaliriumCarnaliriumover 2 years ago

Great story! Would love to see more of Sarah! Maybe getting new virgins to exploit or getting Jessica’s boyfriend in an uncompromising position with another female so Jessica returns.

ElectricEgoElectricEgoover 2 years agoAuthor

@MrWilbur Thank you for your comment!

ElectricEgoElectricEgoover 2 years agoAuthor

@Carnalirium I really appreciate the comments. Present as many suggestions as you like!

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenueover 2 years ago

really enjoyed it. would like if there were more detail on jessica's parts, or perhaps if sarah sold the right to knck her sister up while she swapped out her birth control pills, or if jessica found out what was going on and was into it

ElectricEgoElectricEgoover 2 years agoAuthor

@coolstrangeravenue Thank you! I am glad that you like it. And thank you for your feedback. It is helpful!

dieter40sndieter40snover 2 years ago

geile Story, danke..

ElectricEgoElectricEgoover 2 years agoAuthor

@dieter40sn Thank you!

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