All Comments on 'The Butterfly Effect'

Hot fantasy. I have had nearly the exact fantasy for many years. I love the 'sadistic' torture of making your partner climax in public via remote.

I love the remote vibe in public idea! I don't think the 2nd person style works well, and the writing style is slightly hyper, if that makes sense. Good start, keep writing.

Loved the story. Its a great sexy idea and the public nature makes it even more exciting. Well written too. Look forward to reading more of your stories if they are as hot as this!

Of all the stories I have read, this is my favorite. Why have you only posted 4 stories!? I beg you, please write more.