by Usagi-chan
Of all the stories I have read, this is my favorite. Why have you only posted 4 stories!? I beg you, please write more.
Loved the story. Its a great sexy idea and the public nature makes it even more exciting. Well written too. Look forward to reading more of your stories if they are as hot as this!
I love the remote vibe in public idea! I don't think the 2nd person style works well, and the writing style is slightly hyper, if that makes sense. Good start, keep writing.
Hot fantasy. I have had nearly the exact fantasy for many years. I love the 'sadistic' torture of making your partner climax in public via remote.