by Edgewater
I thought it was mistake. 62? Clearly you meant 26.
But by the end of it, I realized it wasn't a mistake.
Keep writing. I'm sure someone will enjoy it. :)
OR is there a second part to this story? Just wondering...
The tag line doesn't fit the story:
1st They don't end up at the cabin before the end of the story
2nd She doesn't escape.
You shouldn't have used the tag line you did, because it disappointed me as a reader not to have read what I thought I was going to.
The story really had no ending, seems it got cut off before anything really happened, they never made it to the cabin so the title doesn't really fit.