All Comments on 'The Cabin'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
At first.....

I thought it was mistake. 62? Clearly you meant 26.

But by the end of it, I realized it wasn't a mistake.

Keep writing. I'm sure someone will enjoy it. :)

netviper21netviper21almost 14 years ago
And how did she escape?

OR is there a second part to this story? Just wondering...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
The tag line

The tag line doesn't fit the story:

1st They don't end up at the cabin before the end of the story

2nd She doesn't escape.

You shouldn't have used the tag line you did, because it disappointed me as a reader not to have read what I thought I was going to.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HUH?

The story really had no ending, seems it got cut off before anything really happened, they never made it to the cabin so the title doesn't really fit.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I am so glad

you didn't continue this. The first part was bad enough.

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