All Comments on 'The Cabin'

More please!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Could have been a good story except for the ridiculous exaggeration. It ruined the story. Every time you mentioned his balls they got bigger, if the story was any longer they would have been the size of the cabin/

But the exaggerated size did make the story hard to even fantasize about. I kept finding myself thinking “there is no way (even with extreme tucking) that he could hide that in a wrestling singlet” or “he couldn’t even walk with balls the size of two basketballs or watermelons!” The story would have been more enjoyable if he was say 12-14” with balls the size of billiard balls. Still enormous but not deformed!!

If his alarm goes off at six every morning, how is he running the neighborhood at five?????? A good story still needs careful editing.........

Good God. This could have been a realy nice, sexy love story. Ridiculous size queen fantasy. Please do better.

The premise of the story is really sweet, but I agree that the unrealistic and inconsistent descriptions made the story hard to follow.

25 inches...yeah ok

More parts coming?

I loved it! Don't listen to the others about the sizes being too big. If anything, they could be bigger! I'll be keeping an eye out for whatever you write next.

Thanks for the feedback so far! While everyone is entitled to their opinions, this story is catered to a certain audience, and I included a disclaimer (literally: "unrealistic proportions") at the beginning to reflect that. Different strokes for different folks, I guess. If you're not into that fantasy, perhaps try reading something else! I don't mind the comments, though, so keep them coming, and let me know what you'd like to see next.

I don't have a problem with the unrealistically huge proportions, but I do agree about consistency, just gotta edit a little more. And basketball sized nuts are just funny to imagine lol. But I did really enjoyed the story! Super cute relationship!

Loved how Matt got all emotional, he's so sweet... and hung. ^^

Please keep writing, can't wait to hear how things turn out beween these two.