All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 07'

by MaddieKim

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Dinora3228Dinora3228about 13 years ago
Nothing more about Suzette?

and I love it - I might wonder what happed to Suzette but I don't need it. Lovely story. Thanks.

BillPorterBillPorterabout 13 years ago
Suzette !!!!

I loved your story, about a man that loved his wife, and saved her from the evil clutches of Suzette. I think it would have been fitting, for Kitten to know what happened to her tormentor.

ShadowedDreamsShadowedDreamsabout 13 years ago
Thank-you

For a most touching story.<br/>

I agree with the decision to not detail in this story what happened to "that bitch" and am delighted with the ending you settled on.<br/>

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-ShadowedDreams

boojum17boojum17about 13 years ago
A fine story

I have enjoyed this enormously from the first chapter to the last; you write extremely well in this genre and I have no hesitation whatever in awarding this 5 *s.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us and I look forward to reading much more of your work in the future.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 13 years ago
yes!!

ohh, I totally loved this story, the ending was spot on.

I can't wait to see what you write next.

snakeeye108snakeeye108about 13 years ago
One more chapter

An idea for one more chapter would be what Suzette was made to endure. I'm sure her "punishment" could be described in a very erotic way. Her enslavement to a very cruel Master would be a fitting end. Your ability to tell a great story is terrific. Please keep writing.

Andromeda7Andromeda7about 13 years ago
Well done . Enjoyed the story.

Cool!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Sorry but I feel the lack of dealing with the bitch was a cop out

After all these chapters you just wraped it up and walked away. Not cool. I enjoyed the first couple of chapters, and then stayed through the rest for the final show down with the bitch.

:(

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Maddiek

Another good job. I don't think another chapter is necessary, however; a new story entitled "Suzette's Suffering" is in order. Perhaps in that you could expand on Kit and Mike's future. You are superb. 10 **********. Thank you for you.

oldtwitoldtwitover 12 years ago
Super read

A Great set of chapters, I love the pace of it all and hope to see more very soon of a like standard, I'm in two minds as to weather you should follow this up and will hope someone will go that extra mile to finnish the come back, but if it sis not your liking to do this so be it, great read.. Thanks

Scorpio44aScorpio44aalmost 12 years ago
"Very interesting..."

I really like a well crafted story with a solid beginning, a meaty middle and an ending that ties together the loose ends. This story is one of those. Thank you for a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Evan?

Could you write a story telling more of what Evan did at the cabin?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love this story!

This is the third or fourth time I've read this story. Great read. Hope you will write another story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for sharing your imagination with us. It was a beautiful story with exactly right mix of BDSM. You have a gift with words. I hope you share this gift with us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
nice

Wow, You even got the name correct... I have such an "affinity" (let's just leave it at that) for the main character.... uncanny in coincidences. The only differences being, I do my own "dirty work". Blood, pain, guts and the eventuality of it all (death) is just part of the game we all play called life.

A very good story!

Smokepole

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A very satisfying story, but I, too, would like to see how Suzette suffered.

Barry

WargamerWargamer4 months ago

A great story, l really enjoyed it

Scores 5/5 and deserves that score.

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