by kotor248
Easily five stars. At first I wasn't sure about taking him out in the snow, but that was so erotic especially when She fucked him. Then bringing him back inside, covering him up and riding him...Hot stuff!
Im canadian so the cold bits make me shudder... Must not be as cold there as here :)
5* just for the great writing. And a bonus star if i could for drawing Nommy out. He hates femdom but keeps reading it. Go figure. Love you Nommy!
Yes, you made it! Very sensual, lovely. Your talent shines through no worries. Now I must catch up with you to be in time; a worthy high mark you set there. I must try hard.
Your writing is fantastic, I was turned on right to the end. Keep it coming !
And, for a first submission to Literotica, quite outstanding. I do so hope you will write and share much more with us. Thank you, welcome, and please have five stars,
Very, very well written.
You captured the superficial emotions of submission and lay them out in words.
Great story. Looking forward to more.