All Comments on 'The Cage'

Certainly shouldn't be considered writing. Maybe one person will enjoy it. Maybe two. Swingerjoe and frontlinecaster will probably love how original it is.

How idiotic has one to be to write such a crap!!!

Nobody makes anyone come here and read the stories.Its all free.

Just read the stories and enjoy.Different strokes for different folks.

I would repost in fetish, the lw crowd is super insecure about cuckolding stories. Great story btw!

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Love to be use this way. FUN FUN FUN YUM YUM YUM

Very hot, keep going with more. I'm wet and horny, great story xoxoxo Annette

I assume this was put in the LW category by mistake. If not you had to know you were going to get raped by the commenters. It probably should be in BDSM or possibly Fetish. It will do OK in either of those sections. Personally, I've never really understood switches. Obviously they exist but I don't understand it. I'm a hetero, safely sadistic, dominant and have known that for many, many years. It's who I am. Yep, some of you will see me as a sick pervert because of that but I game to an understanding with this part of me some 40+ years ago. When I met the woman that would become my wife, she was subbing to a dominant couple. I met them at an event and became friends. To make a very long story somewhat shorter, with all in consent she ended up as my sub. Years later ( Dec 31, 1999 to be exact) we married in a lifestyle wedding a couple of hours before 2000 became a reality. Over time she discovered she could dominate some submissive women and enjoyed it enough that she asked me if she could try a male sub. It turned out to be a disaster. She just couldn't dominate a male. Males were superior in her mind and it just didn't work. I'm sitting here smiling a sI remember some of the things that happened while she was trying. She could switch with women but never with males. I give this info to point out that kink casts a wide net and there aren't neat little boxes with name tags that people fit into. Ya'll play hard and safe.

Remember the line about, its better to keep your mouth shut and let everyone think you are stupid, rather than talk openly and confirm their suspicions? We need to allow people to show their brilliance, or their asses. And we each get to choose which is which. Annette thinks this story is marvelous, and is anyone surprised? While others think the author should be hanged. It is so Donald Trumpish, just say it, do it, don't complain and don't explain. I prefer it to a bunch of mealy mouth platitudes and politically correct gibberish. ITS JUST WORDS!!

Sure words have power, but not these words. Just a silly ridiculous intellectual masturbation from the author. He just jizzed over everyone who read this tripe, and its probably as close to passion and orgasm as he has ever come. He needs our sympathy, as does his soon to be miserable wife. I suspect they deserve each other.

Lost it after first paragraph.

If this is what you think erotic is I really feel sorry for you, get some help. Complete fetish.

The story was rushed and needs more build up and back story. I look forward to your next story. Don't listen to the haters, trolls, and flamers most of whom have never posted a story of their own.

Not losing my time expalining why it's in the wrong category...Just sayin this was a "paingasms" without the gasms...1*

And what makes you think it's a LW story. There is a BDSM category that the first paragraphs seem to indicate it belongs. 1*

First line: It had been some months since Dom and Linda had played with others. Played what? Cards, baseball, hide the salami?

Second line:

After their last adventure, things went "quite?" during the birth, recovery, midnight feeds etc.

Birth of what, recovery from what, midnight feeds of the.... puppies?

The first two lines contain two utterly unconnected thoughts both worthy of further explanation and clarification that is missing.

fag cuck shit.

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka ANON!

Stupid fetish

Without stories like this you wouldn't have anything to whine about. It's not a LW story, though.

The concept is OK, need to really work on the presentation.

The dialogue in particular is weak. Do people really talk like this?

A husband with no warning, puts a cage on, and arranges for a complete stranger to arrive at this house in 15 minutes? He's lucky to still be married....

Disregard those who attack the story because it isn't their 'style'.

I always wonder why once looking at what the story is about, especially tags WHY? do you read it anyway?

Move on

Not a wife to be seen. Wrong category. And the cage is a toy he removes, without a key, any time he wants. Too funny for words.

The cage is a toy. He can remove it without the key. He can masturbate and ejaculate while wearing it. And Dom is so stupid he's having unprotected sex and now has HIV, herpes and several std's. Just a god awful story of stupidity.

I'm super insecure about cuckold stories. They make me want to hurt another humn. What kind of woman, actually whore, could find this a turn on. Must be a brain dead slut for certain.

both of these freaks are sterile.

This belongs in FETISH. And all he has to do is call the police, have them remove the cage and arrest his wife. Or just take it off (it's a toy) and divorce the bitch. Stupid.

OMG. Loved the story. sucking cock and getting fucked in front of my wife is always hot for me. so emasculating and exciting.