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All Comments on 'The (Cam) Girl Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story!

It went differently than I expected. There is room for more stories. I hope there are!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Story

I love how the wife is getting involved. Interested in seeing how she progresses and if he's ready for it.

lazy_readerlazy_readeralmost 6 years ago
Keeping Marcus (and the reader) off balance

Intriguing story. I almost feel sorry for Marcus. Between Lynn and Aubrey, his world is being rocked. I'm anxious to see where this goes.

One point I was confused about: When Marcus moved the action from where Aubrey started it to the living room, how was the laptop in the right place to record it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice start

Many possibilities for more chapters. Please continue.

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There's not much to tell. I've been writing different works, serious and silly, erotic and political, for the past decade. I enjoy reading and writing and I think there is nothing greater then to connect mentally and intellectually with the people that read my work. If yo...