by zeropatience
well written, well paced,,cryptic and sarcastic, and funny and loving and romantic,,def for adults and not pimply faced 15 year olds,,loved it.
You're writing is authentic and believable. Very sensual and exciting. Now...please get chapter 4 done!!! Dying for the next piece.
I just re-read the Cameltoe trilogy. I love reading about Hannah and her sister. My lust meter pegs every time. The brief sexual side trip with Hannah's parents left me wanting. It's been long enough, please write another chapter...