All Comments on 'The Camera'

Well-written, brief, and erotic. No intercourse, but beautifully described female excitement.

The central character's desire for the camera's attention becomes increasingly powerful and increasingly convincing throughout. This is erotic and delicious work!

wonderfully written...short-descriptive and enjoyable...

such a great grasp of human nature as the seduction of the camera erases all trace of inhibition... I loved this story extremely erotic...

MMMmmmm that sweet little red bulls eye!

... a sexy story and a standing ovation' ending. Cheers again for your flowing and sensual erotic tale.

It takes quite something to take this well-established theme and lift it above the ordinary, but you certainly succeeded. Taut, concise, precise, explicit, very very sexy indeed. The writing style mirrors the narrator's experience: controlled and restrained to start with, then becoming more flowing and impressionistic as she loses control and her arousal takes hold. Loved it. Thank you.

Very well written. Short and sweet. I have to agree with a previous comment that you have taken a common theme and made it your own.I love the imagery...