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by Ann Douglas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Damned fine writing

Head and shoulders above most of what is posted on this site! I particularly admired the way you wove the threads of Patrick's present day, 18th birthday, and earlier memories into a smooth and satisfying vignette. You have done your namesake proud and I'll be sure to check out your other works.

Ann DouglasAnn Douglasover 6 years agoAuthor
Namesake?

What namesake are you talking about?

gunmakergunmakerover 6 years ago

Even after 41 years, I still remember my first. We stayed friends for many years. Even after we both were married to others. Some things just seem to important to forget.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 1 year ago

Like that last line, a kid in a candy store. Indeed, the one where he became a man, physically anyway.

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userAnn Douglas@Ann Douglas
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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...