All Comments on 'The Captain Finds a Sub'

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lottyboolottybooalmost 15 years ago
Complex but good!!

It's quite a complex story, what with all the ropes and that! But I really enjoyed it. Its nice to read a story that's not 'all or nothing' if you see what I'm saying, there was just the right amount of domination, ACE!

danalearnsdanalearnsalmost 15 years ago
a good read

i enjoyed reading this story. yes a lot about the rope work but i thinkyou described it well in a way that i could picture what was happening. thank you for sharing your talents.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A Vivid Hot Story!

Yeah, I love the way I could see everything that was happening in such vivid detail. The unfolding of her tumble into submission was well written and quite believable. And, of course, the sex was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very nice!...

...It definitely needs to continue. Please continue the story.

G

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good story

Enjoyable read, erotic.

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