All Comments on 'The Captive'

Not bad, please write more

Check out my "wake-up-and-discover" story (of course, I took it in a different direction):

Lair of the Carter Brothers (Sequel to QB MURDERED

CHEERLEADER MISSING)

Vampires keep Katie naked and alive to feed on her.

by Abdulbenthere© Literotica.com Erotic Horror

• vampires –

• naked –

• victims –

• new orleans –

• ghosts –

• bondage

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=385068

Only complaint is it wasn't longer

Only complaint is it wasn't longer

This was a delicious set piece - erotically charged. I look forward to having you deliver a more fully developed story...don't forget, half the fun is getting there! Bravo

And no mention of giving her water or allowing her to use the toilet. Also, how did she end up there? Was she kidnapped? Is this a game between them. "Pour substitute" is incorrect. Pour is a verb meaning to transfer liquid from a vessel. You meant to say "poor substitute."