All Comments on 'The Captive Ch. 01'

by baldirishman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice start

Good start to an intriguing story line!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
mmmm... bondage

I've only had fantasies about bondage, but I made a whole set when I was 16.

-Kalika

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
Interesting...

well told and written from a directive end. look forward to reading on and hope you enjoyed writing this as well as the others yet to come as i did reading it...thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A fascinating

start and an interesting way to tell the story.

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