All Comments on 'The Car Starter'

Once was rape! All the others were cheating! Maybe keep the kid, but definitely BTB.

Sorry but most women would not cave to blackmail. And Karen trying to get pregnant while still letting the monster rape her (blackmail sex is rape( is just beyond dumb. Stay on the pill!! And yet none of the sixteen women being simultaneously blackmailed do anything about it until Karen speaks up regarding the pregnancy. Wtf? This predator is somehow beyond a supervillain. I know this is fiction but it was just way beyond surreal. Do we even know how.many times Karen caved to the asshole's demands? How long it went on for? No one thought to get him recorded. Get counter leverage. Or wait I don't know tell your mob boss husband that you were raped and their is video but the rapist wants to keep raping me. Hmm woukd think that woukd have fixed the problem. And yeah the supervising rapist is so amrt that he targets a mob boss' wife. Genius! So many inconsistencies and weird contrivance. Doesn't hold up well at all. Reads like something from NylonDreams where there is always drugs and rape involved and the situation is over the top.

Drugged, raped, and blackmailed.

And all the in-laws were in on the cover up.

Mobster's wife was a victim and this idiot was still walking around?

Just bad.

Nicely done bravo

👏👏👏👏👏

Beyond awful and then trying to lecture men that the husbands are ultimately at fault.

I liked this story but it's in serious need of editing,

First story had a happy ending.

Such a simple but widespread drugging, rape, blackmail scheme would never make it to 16 women. Ridiculous. I agree with other commenters below that the extortion of repeated blackmail (rape) sex would not work. None of this 16 women, thought yo get tested for drugs, and then tell their husband? Balderdash.