All Comments on 'The Carson's Party Ch. 02'

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I've been wet before, from reading stories here on Lit, but never, <i>ever</i> this wet!

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I can't wait for the girls to 69 in the bathroom and pee into each others mouth as they cum...

the end seemed a bit rushed

damn, easily my favorite lesbian story. very nice work!

I just wish it went on longer, though....if there had been like chapter 3 which described the rest of the night or something...

Wonderfully written and full of unusual and strong images. The characters are distinct and likeable. So sexy. I really think you should write another chapter. Perhaps one in which Kim and Elise trick some other "straight" girl into attending the next party at the Carsons' house.

Again you produced a masterpiece! I am a big fan you! Love all your stories! Please keep writing...perhaps a chapter 3 of the carson's party?

Big fan of your work!!! Please don´t keep us waiting to much for the next chapter. You have lots of plot ahead. Wonderful caracters and powefull images.

I loved this story, much like many of your others. But, I was hoping you would explore these characters more by making them do something more kinky like peeing on each other or bondage.

That was AWESOME!

I've read chapters 1 and 2 several times. Together they make a very good story. I enjoy your dialogue and the sex is hot, of course. I just have to tell you that this line from chapter 2 keeps me giggling every time I think of it, "You dare to quack at me when I am in mid-sentence. You stupid, queer duck!" LOL I love it.

Good Descriptions in this story. Having said that I have a pet peeve for when people bring love into their story and it amounts to nothing and they make it known it will amount to nothing. I really felt that all of these characters where just a bunch of whores.

Enjoyed this selection of stoties,just enough of chat,would like more of the sex but then I am bereft of sex except for Literotica

Well, what can I say. What a wonderful little story about how these 3 ladies gradually got to know one another!

The comments often add greatly to enjoyment.

Loved it. I feel badly for thinking the dialog in pt 1 was not as strong as it could have been. It was so much better in this one. I also wanted to comment on the fashionista sense. Good details there and also made the E's perspective, in particular, feel more nuanced. She definitely noticed what others were wearing.

Loved the morning after the night before conversation.