All Comments on 'The Cat and the Mouse Ch. 03'

Was just starting to get interesting. I'm surprised that Carla is that stupid.She should know that her friend wouldn't be that callous and that her boyfriend is a jerk.

....no. Moves far too quickly, little or no character development, poorly edited, and not enough sex. And what happened to the whole predator/prey theme? This one's a bust.

I still like how the story's going, short..,yes, rushed....a bit, but not being able to guess correctly what will happen next makes it interesting. I especially want to see how Carla handles the whole issue, and Jax, he's downright nasty and Nick should at least be man enough not to get used and hurt by losers like Jax.

I think its hot! A little short but I liked the rushed feel!

I think it would be hot if Nick continues to be dominated by Jax, like he acts really pissed off with him and everything, but when Jax comes on to him it's obvious he still has a hold on him!

Please right more soon!

Hey man when's the next chapter?!

Please say it's coming soon! :D