by Fantasyballer
Just why the hell would he want to reconnect with a whore he admits he doesn't know? Fucking the girls for free is all good, but the ex-wife now full time whore is someone he wouldn't want to ever touch again.
Because life is complicated and the realization that Lana would do this is a very fresh and shocking development. How he handles all of it could change in a week. He once loved her and believes he still does. It’s utter confusion at this point.
I made the very last scene uncomfortable for a reason…
It was pretty good until Lana returned and he doubled down on being a pathetic wimp instead of a man. Not exactly the kind of main character that allows for a reader like me to immerse themself into the story. It takes more than playing STD Roulette with a group of whores to overcome that. Maybe you managed that in later chapters, but you certainly didn't in this one.