All Comments on 'The Celtic Harp'

Just light fun. Nice

God don't we all wish this, reguardless of the problem we might be able to fix. I liked it.

5/5

Outstanding!

Loved it.

What a feel-good story!

No willing cucks here!

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why do authors of cuck stories always say that? as though being an unknowing cuck makes any difference in the long run

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to recap the cuck-ian angel let her keep her husband and all the memories of having sex with other men

I enjoyed this! It's nice to have a light story with a happy ending sometimes! Thank you!

From the high to the low.,.. Thes still hope.

Moronic.

Beautiful story that reminds us of Dicken's famous one. Thank you!

And sure, tis a wonderful story that a foolish readers could learn from if they have the mind to.

An awesome story! Very well written and engaging! 5/5 BRB

I love your Patrick stories. The gift of a second chance.

Not overthinking, it is all right there, she still won in the end. She had a nine day whorefest to look back on fondly, and later was rewarded by Patrick, to going back in time to live another reality. Nothing changed, Michael is still married to a no good whore.

Nicely done. Thank you!

A very enjoyable story. Well done

Thanks! Nice little 5* fantasy.

Personally, I think some people don't deserve second chances. If Brittany didn't go on that trip, I'd agree that she deserved one. Since she did, my opinion is that she doesn't. Sure, this was a second chance for Michael, but there could have been better ways of him getting one than Brittany getting a happy ending I don't believe she deserves.

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I've never been a fan of 'supernatural' elements to non-fantastical stories. Just my tastes. Thanks for sharing the story.

A cute little St Patrick’s Day story with a good ending.

Hopefully in life we don't get what we deserve!

5

A fun and entertaining read except an Irishman would not refer to his native language as Irish Gaelic but just Gaelic. Sort of like the Italian restaurant in Italy. thing.

It was a great read

5stars

Well done! Thanks for writing!

Clever AND well written. 4.8*

Lovely

Not bad, not bad at all.

I liked it. I also didn't see this as a second chance for Brittany but as a second chance for her poor husband. That she benefited is just added but he didn't go through life dead. I have known 2 men whose wives killed them in the same manner. They were miserable the rest of their lives. 5 stars and a thanks for sharing.

Poor story. Brittany does not deserve a second chance. Michael does but his second chance will be with someone else.

Excellent.

she said she just wanted to spare he husband the hurt, so why didnt Patty stroke the bitch out and let the husband find a second wife who wasnt a turbo slut?

Great little happy Irish story. My favorite physical therapist was named Patrick O’Shaunessy. He was the best I’ve ever had. Wonder if he’s the same Patrick.

Your world is O Kay by me. I like happy endings. 5-stars.

Don’t we all wish for a do-over…if only.

Good dialogue and interesting plot line. By the time Patrick did his thing, I was rooting for the ex wife - she was truly repentant. The belch was a nice touch as well!

hey! This is identical to a version of febsux somewhere... other than that, perfect formula for these themes!

Very enjoyable and entertaining. Thanks !

Always like these stories, being able to fix fuckups in the past.

Thanks for writing.

5

Only thing I question is an Dublin bartender giving a tourist grief for having a Guinness.

Four stars. Five for the fine story and minus 1 for dragging it out unnecessarily.

I swear I’ve read this before…or a story eerily like it!

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4 ****

Nothing to over think. St. pat’s Day has always been holy to us Irish and this is a great reminder of why….

" perfect formula for these themes!"

Right, cause the wife get a lifetime of riding a cavalcade of cock on the husbands money, and if she ever comes to regret it a cuck making guardian angel gives a slut a mulligan so she can relive her life staying with a sap she has no love for all whilst keeping the memory of all her alternate timelines sex adventures

Great story, thank you! 5 BIG FAT FUCKING ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s

Unfortunately this seems very similar to another story on Literotica...but still enjoyable

Mariverz. February Pay It Forward by me. Patrick the leprechaun is my character.

I enjoy having him right things once in a while.

A few people commented about her remembering her time with Winslow in Italy. She has only the faintest recollections (Like a faint dream) of the fuckfest and she made it clear that Winslow was not that great in bed and the memories were not good ones for her. She remembered only enough to screw up when presented with the opportunity to take a different path.

Even being a quarter Irish, I have never seen such things...but the Irish believe them, or like to pull your leg...or both.

Nothing to overthink here. Just a solid, enjoyable tale.

Thanks for the share, author.

Very nicely done... five stars worth, and a belated Happy Saint Patrick's Day to all who celebrate it !

I can't really overthinl this story.

Magic and time travel is just so convenient it just kills any interest for the story for me so impossile there is not an ounce of reality it sucks. At least other stories even though a fantasy but at least real people can relate.

Was good.

Like it except for the fallacy size element, it undermines the credibility of your story

Well, I say it was good , ok, for someone even very good. Some others didn’t like the…. magic way … it gone like ‘in the end it was just a dream’ but hey, it worked, somehow. So this time Karma gave St.Patrick way to fix the situation, well?!

In my version, the reset of time would have gone way back in time when Michael met Brittany first time and … looking in her eyes for longer than a few seconds, he turned around and walked away not knowing why but feeling better than in years.

Cheers, Pat

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Like others have said it's just a silly fun story. If one really wants to overthink it, they would say not even time travel can fix a cheater. It takes a special combo of personality traits to overcome millenia of monogamy social conditioning. And those are always there. Only way that time wizard barman could fix her, would be to send her back to her childhood when those traits form.

Yer, you did a good job with this one, nicely told.

What a fun story. I have to give this story 5 stars from Xluckylee

Verra nice indeed!

It was going great until the magic.