All Comments on 'The Centaur Ranch Pt. 05'

Your stories and style just keep getting better and better. I can only await your next submission. Keep up the great storyline and style.

Joel

The true work of a talented artist..would expect no less....from someone who appreciates the work as well as the artist. If you ever change your mind regarding "the rules of the game"...I will be waiting...because the finer things in life are worth waiting for....

Loved the whole series.........Want more

I have read all the five parts and am quite impressed! You invented a whole new world, with a lot of adventure and eroticism in it. The basic idea is fantastic, and you have developed it masterfully - a true achievement!This last part, with its accent on a male human dominating male centaurs, is particularly well done. And what an idea, to have used the Hansel and Gretel tale to discover a means to attract the male centaurs...

Congratulations Blackbel! I have completed the reading of your Centaur series and voted highest grade for all the five sections. Your talent is truly remarkable! The story keeps its pace, with new and surprising turns, and the character building is very good. Give us more of your stories as soon as possible.

After reading all the 32 chapters of this exceptional little novel, there is only one thing I can say: Thank you, Blackbel! Your efforts have been rewarded: you keep the interest of your reader, the story flows well, the sex scenes are quite hot, and the overall effect is of a little gem of the erotic genre.

Three hurrahs for you!

this is great horny till da end you should write a chaper 6:)

why dont u title it "slavery and the good ole days...rubbish

This seems more like something I would've read back in the 1820s, in the slavery days.

I do not like the fact that sentient beings were taken from their home and turned into slaves using violence and subterfuge. Would like to see a part 6 that has the centaurs break out and roam free once more