All Comments on 'The Challenge'

Come on can't leave it on a cliff hanger

You better find the time to continue... my dick just cant wait

Nice story, well composed and laid out. A few spelling errors/typos, but we all manage those. It's not easy to write something different on a what is a common erotic theme, but I agree with others here, that the story has legs and could have a sequel. Bravo.

Continue please.

Jeepers. Excellent build up, great crescendo, and then FLOP she’s gone. You have talent that must produce more chapters in the maturation of Vince and the love/ lust with his Aunt. Please and thanks.

Would love another chapter, hope they found each other....

Well done! Hoping you have more in you to continue this excellent use of a differing erotic theme.

more please

That’s a solid twist ending. Really improves the erotica.

I was enjoying the story until I got to the end.....I did not see that coming

That’s so hot…Aunts, mothers, it’s amazing how fucking sexy they can be..older, experienced, perhaps also needy… as a young man you’re almost defenseless too…my mother’s marriage was over and she started acting differently toward me..prancing around in just a robe, letting her black bra peek out.. She’d catch me staring but I also would see her looking too.. looking at how hard she had made her young adult son..I’d risk peeking at her bra again, and….it would suddenly just jerk so hard…mmmm..

Great story…

RJ

Really well written. I think we all need that other story.