All Comments on 'The Challenge Ch. 01'

I loved it! Very hot description of the action, and I'm dying to read more. Thanks for writing it...I'll be checking back daily to see where it leads ;)

GREAT STORY I KNOW IT OLD NOW BUT BOY DO YOU HAVE A TALENT

FOR WRITING. THE CHALLENGE CH1. WAS SO VERY HOT CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART. EXCELLENT STORY AND WRITING.

PITY YOU ARE NOT CARRYING ON WRITING YOU ARE ONE OF A HELL OF A WRITER.SO COME ON GET TYPING AGAIN PLEASE.