All Comments on 'The Cheating Zone 13: Treatment'

Let he who is without sin... Good stuff.

Got me good with that one! 5*

Excellent, as always.

Cool twist

Another gem. 5*s

This really isn't a loving wives story it's more like science fiction where the laws of reality or bent and Twisted I get that the author is trying to a Twilight Zone type of thing with these stories but this one really does not work.

Brilliant. 5-stars & Favorite.

I loved it...

Wonderful twist!

...great twist. Great story. 5 stars. Thanx...

Loklie

loved saddletramp1956's stories. no good endings for the cheaters.

Reminds me of the old adage about revenge and two graves. Not bad at all. I liked it five stars.

An interesting twist to the tale, but still good.

Very

Nice twist at the end.

Now that's a new ending. Well done. 5 stars*****

I can see it now -SaddleTramp Treatment Facilities in every large city. I wonder if it’s worth buying a franchise at this early stage?

Thank you for another fun story.

While it's a good lesson it disappoints compared to the rest of the series

"That is, if you're not in jail for child porn or something." - If she can get so much legally, why lie to REALLY fuck him over?

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"You'd kill us?" she asked, shocked. - She's shocked after what she just said they'd do to him?

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He should get a new job. Nobody else has the same pay and benefits? So what, she'll only get half anyway, so why keep busting his ass?

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She fucks over their marriage, threatens him with a ruinous divorce and worse, and now is upset that he's mean to her?

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"The Saddletramp Treatment." - Please don't self-reference either yourself or Lit in stories.

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"Even now, they're plotting ways to turn you into her willing cuckold." - She seemed a little too upset to be planning anything, and there's no way he'll be their WILLING cuckold.

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Decent twist at the end, but since he was the REAL victim here, it's kind of unfair that he shares the fate of the others.

What goes round...

What goes around, comes around! Hint to all: Be very careful how you say things - they may come back to bite you in the ass a la the "Saddletramp Treatment" .

Nice twist.

Be careful what you wish for.

Wasn't expecting THAT!

Now that was a great chapter. Big fan of TZ and you nailed it.

It was yada yada same old then BAM the punch line. 5*

He did ask that all of the cheaters be dealt with. Great story twist ST.

A lot of usual clichés, but you get a little extra for the twist at the end. Thanks!

4*

10 STARS!!! LOVED IT! WHAT A GENIUS. THANKS SADDLETRAMP1956. EXCELLENT FOR MY FIRST READ OF THE MORNING WITH A STIFF CUP OF COFFEE!

Thank you, Rod Serling, for another intriguing episode.

Well done.

Well, that was one hell of a twist. Five for imagination.

fun ending.

Ok. Usual over the top stupid villains but this gets a 4 for the "Zone" ending.

Rod would be proud.

This story was good and the ending freaked me out. It should make anybody think twice about cheating on their spouse. Keep them coming. You're a very good writer

Ha, another fantastic tale from saddletramp1956. Thanks for the enjoyable read. Be careful what you ask for.....you might just get it....as well as the unintended consequences that come as part of the package deal.

5*

Hows it got a 4.0 rating is baffling 1 star

Nice Twist

I liked the ending.

5* on originality alone. Refreshing to read something other than feeble attempts at alternate endings. ST never disappoints!

Once again the Saddletramp comes through with a winner.

Another TZ/ST grand tale. Thanks for the laughs.

5/5

Outstanding ending! What a twist 5* I think the best Cheating Zone yet.

Fun story with a great ending.

Like the concept - used to watch the Twilight Zone back in the day. Otherwise, the story lacks originality, very predictable, offers no erotica, and the characters are poorly developed. Certainly not a 4 much less a 5.

Haha, threw a boulder at his own glass house. Very nicely handled.

Just great light fun, than you ST.

Tramp is taking the Cheating Zone into a new level with this one. Everyone knows what they get with a saddletramp story, so if it hurts you so badly to read it, just don't read it. Troy, in his anger, spoke before thinking it out. Hope the poor fellow doesn't end up in the same altered reality as the cheating wife.

Oops.

Good one, love the twist at the end.

Funny - I suspected the ending, but fun romp regardless! 5*

Sorry, but this one was bad.

But no worries....you are still batting .750 😎

Bravo!

Didn't expect the ending. Very nice twist on being careful what you wish for. Excellent. Thanks for posting.

ST, all the way!

5

A Saddletramp special, I loved the ending, made me crack up.

Mind you don't trip over your ego there Tramp. Self referencing in a story is bad form.

Other than that, another fun story, though the end was a little telegraphed.

I really like your stories. I appreciate that you are a TZ fan from your intro. As soon as Troy's hand started fading I knew I was in the TZ. I remember the episode that you got your inspiration,from. The man was in his living room waiting for the clock to strike noon. He arranged with (who?) to make alll bad people in the world shrink down to six inches in height. He anxiously watched the second hand approach noon. 57, 58, 59 ....."Noon. It worked. He was now six inches tall.

I was not fond of the ending as I wanted more drama. I don't know if I can send this review as my finger keeps dissolving on my keyboard when I try to hit send. Shit!

Interesting story and twist ending but not quite up to the standards we expect from ST in the Cheating Zone! I would give it a 4.51 if given two decimal point accuracy but since it is single digit we round up to a 5.0! This one sorta scratched an itch for me but still a BTB. How about a BTP (Burn The Prick) for a change? Hubby is an absolute AH and Wife is squeaky clean Hubby gets screwed in the end (sorry maybe I should rephrase that) not. If I could write it I would but there is only one saddle Tramp on this site.

Give it a shot! Bet it would rate at least a 2.5!

Cheers

SAGE

with a new twist. Harry didn't like it so it's good.

Clever ending, but overall, this one left me cold. Which was surprising, since I usually really like your writing...

yeah im not sure why she just didnt divorce him and take him to the cleaners. although not sure why she didnt marry someone richer to do this to. what was all that crying about? that was very weird. was it suppose to be crocodile tears or something? to make him think, what? that she really does love him even though she pretty much told him she doesnt. then theres making holes all over the place just to shove some scifi/fantasy in there. all of that and idk i guess it was an ok ride even though the first page was a LW template cliché

Yep, loved it

I have all 156 episodes in glorious B and W of the Twilight Zone. Love these stories.

Love ST1956 version too

Scores 5/5

Try harder next time and really BTB

Clm

Great as usual. Sterling would be proud!!!

Interesting twist, but the overall story was very inconsistent. The wife was very defiant concerning her affair, then seemingly heartbroken, crying, and wanting forgiveness and reconciliation, but then still plotting his downfall? In addition to the sudden addition of more lovers? I enjoy your writing and stories, but this one wasn’t up to your normal standards.

story itself was alil confusing, well atleast about the part about his wifes feelings. seemed like she regretted her actions but then in another moment shes a vindictive bitch. maybe the hidden meaning here is that all females can act this way with a single thought.

It is simple!!!!!

This one went to the shitter

Didn't see the twist at the end coming. TY.

Love it.

Keep 'em comin'.

There is a place, after all, for the old saying, "justice is blind"...

:-) :-) SMILES!!

Didn't like this one. Bill and wife are the embodiment of evil who are trying to frame the MC. She's deliberately is cheating on him with impunity and is going to drug him and set him up because he wants a divorce because of her skanky behavior.

In end the MC gets screwed over by the author because of a single cheating vs the skank's atrocities. Sorry, but that really sucks.

Great touch

Bullshit

Love the twist at the end, like they say, "be careful what you wish for" and Troy found that out the hard way for getting one of his own indiscretion some years ago. Well done. 5/5

Nice twist. But sucks because his wife and her lover were monsters and he was not. Regardless it is the old monkey paw wish thing.

Excellent! You are the best ST! No doubt about it! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great twist

nice fake story that didn't grab me at all..... Enjoy most of your writing this one simply didn't exist, nor did it register on any wavelength..

Good story, nice twist at the end. I didn’t see that one coming. Thanks for sharing.

This was a great story. Troy asked that all the cheaters in his relationship be made to not exist but he forgot he cheated on his wife five years ago. In the end, Troy, Jenny, and Bill ceased to exist. Great story and five stars!!! They all got the SaddleTramp treatment.

Nice!

Oopsies!

Wife was unrealistic and delusional. Twist at end raised it to 4 stars.