All Comments on 'The Cheerleader'

This was great! I loved how empowered and in control she was; can we have a group sex sequel as she fucks the rest of the team please?

Kims takes being a slut to a whole new level. Good story.

Stilted dialogue and this ridiculous “polyamory” tag to cover for the fact she’s just a skank willing to let an entire football team pull a train on her doesn’t make a compelling story, or a likable character.

Good short story, you filled in the scene and characters, even their motivation, a bit more sensory description would be better, but it flies as is. Hey there anon, if you don’t like the subject matter don’t read it and get butthurt about it (see what I did there), everyone’s morals are their own responsibility, NOT your concern.

A high school football team is going to be at least 40 guys. So this filthy skank is getting a 40 man train pulled on her weekly? Teenage dudes that regenerate quickly. She's taking maybe 129 loads of cum in all her holes every Friday night not to mention all the needs She's fucking for sport through the week. All this is bareback. What a worthless, disgusting slag.

I loved it. The detail was incredibly! I can’t wait to read what she does with the rest of the team!

It’s sexy and sad. Thank you.