All Comments on 'The Cheerleaders Panties Pt. 09'

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AdrianicusAdrianicusover 3 years ago
cliff hanger

Good story, I am anxiously waiting to see what is next

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So..smoking doobies will cause one to have demonic hallucinations and have great sex....

So Mrs. Leighton is sleeping with both James, his mother and father. I bet Mrs. Leighton also wants some of Sally. ......for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I hope

it's not ending here.

Back2eggBack2eggover 3 years agoAuthor
the party and finale to come!

The Cheerleaders Panties the party

The Cheerleaders Panties Finale

to come

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
One question

What the hell is she smoking? Sounds like Angel Dust, not pot

Back2eggBack2eggabout 3 years agoAuthor

Back2egg7 months agoAuthor

the party and finale to come!

The Cheerleaders Panties the party

The Cheerleaders Panties Finale

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You lost me when.the mother repeatedly kicked him in the balls and then said he was still hard. Like wtf. That's not Even possible.

Back2eggBack2eggover 1 year agoAuthor

It's not the last episode there's, cheerleaders party and finale. It's not pot. I know my drugs lol.

It's a story structure problem. 'the big low' ' or '' visit to death ' or ' the gauntlet' depending on whose your writing guru.

At this stage the protagonist and the story has to hit a low point. Obviously, readers are not going to be easily pleased at this point but thanks for your message, it will be taken into account. Take care.

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