All Comments on 'The Chef's Daughter Pt. 01'

by kodevonish

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WHOAH!!!

Put the breaks on.

I did enjoy the story up until towards the end. For a man who can get any woman he wants, why resorting to blackmail to get this young one to be with him. If successful, I don't think they can get very far. She will resent him, I would...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good writing except

The quid pro quo is pretty funky. Plus how do you get a golden gate view from LA?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
part 3

Please make a 3rd part please

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